For my final piece I attempted to show how an event could affect someone’s behaviour. Although things always feel better the next day the memory and mental archive will change how you go about your day.
I approached the split screen by editing too separate videos the first one is directly below and shows the morning after.
The split screen was put into place as an obstacle that we had to overcome and I have used it to separate the two moods I have attempted to set. I feel a if the edit does well at conveying the two moods, which is reinforced by the split screen. on the other hand I don’t like that it takes this long to get the point across.
I chose to re edit the piece and although it is 4 min whereas the first version was 5 i still think it is much improved. 
the strong use of known tracks heavily carry on the emotion of the two videos, I see this both as a strength and a weakness.
ok I think this is as good as it is going to get. with the restraints on time i am not able to re edit it again but having seen how it works as it is i think i would now attempt to get the two narratives working side by side and not use such strong audio to carry the piece. Hope you enjoy and get the jest
